ms-whipple: sculptsocotillo: the concept is nice, but the wording is off. Using “Your” implies that he didn’t own it, doesn’t possess or control it. I would replace “Your” with “This” (or “This dripping, wet”), and add “understood?”
ms-whipple: sculptsocotillo: the concept is nice, but the wording is off. Using “Your” implies that he didn’t own it, doesn’t possess or control it. I would replace “Your” with “This” (or “This dripping, wet”), and add “understood?”
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